Thursday, October 23, 2008
Thesis 1
Martin Luther King Jr.influenced so many people not just blacks but whites to stand up for there rights and fight for whats right. He also made such and impact on everyone not just in the past but still to this day.Many people refer to Martin Luther King Jr. as an example of inspiration to do what they do. Take look at Barack Obama do you think with out the help of Martin Luther King Jr. and other civil rights leaders that he would be the first African American male to run for president.And Colin Powell the first African American male to become sectary of state. MLK helped bring a nation together,and pave the way for African Americans to become succesful. Him winning the Nobel peace prize showed that he truly believed in what he did.The "I have a dream a speech",and how many people whites and black showed up to support him, was the one everyone will remember.
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This is a great start. You need an introduction and revised thesis statement. Try to use an opening style that will grab the readers' attention.
Grade: Satisfactory
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